I Was The Girl

I was the girl
with an invisible face
I was the girl
who never had a place
the darkness was my friend
but it never seemed right
I always have admired you
for staying in the light
you offered me a hand
when no one else did
you held me tight
and showed me the way
back into the light
I love you so much
for forcing me to fight
for my pathetic life
You grabbed my hands
to stop the cuts
and stopped my mind
from all it's ruts
you grabbed the pieces
 of my heart
and stopped it all
from falling apart
you picked me up
when I was down
never letting my smile
turn back  into a frown
I never understood
why you love me so
but I know
you'll never go
my heart is pounding
yearning to be closer to you
I love this feeling
that is completely new
but still it bothers me
that we are so far apart
But still I will love you
with all of my heart

 

Author's Note

here's another happy one. I can't seem to write much any more. I found out that my sadness was what fueled my writing. (sigh) =(

Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

its so beautiful..and i think your sadness may have been how you wrote before, but i can see you are learning to write in a new way, and you are doing an amazing job.

[Amy]

beautiful, wonderful, amazing
you describe love so well or at least what its like to be in love
love this poem