awken

awken

A Story by Kevin
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one of my first ok songs

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Everyday I awake  

I regret the day

All these things collapsing

Pulling me down in the clay

For where is the hope

All I see is despair

Though I see no hope

I know that you will prevail

 

P.C.      

So I look to you

As I fall on my knees

 

Chorus

Awaken me Lord

Please bring me your light

I want to feel you again

Lord I want to see your face

For in you there is hope

No matter what the case

For you keep no wrongs

You always love

 

V2

When I hear a speech

On all our sins

I don’t see how

I can be forgiven

For in you there is hope

No matter what the case

When I look at myself

All I see is darkness

(pc, c)

 

Bridge

So why do I   run

Away from your love

Into the darkness

Into the cold

 

Pc2

So I come back to you

Asking you to forgive

(c 2x)

© 2010 Kevin


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How lovely :)
The chorus is beautiful, and everything flows together perfectly.
Great write.
~Rabbit

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this is truly amazing! I like your song alot.
especially V2. Wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really love the chorus!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Kevin
Kevin

Bellingham, WA



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