Betraying

Finding Myself Alone

Being Betrayed From Closest Bone

Searching And Finding No Home

Tending To hear A tone

Turning Me To The Normal Clone

 

Author's Note

A True Experience I Had Passed Before

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Perhaps you should not aim to make the poem rhyme...rhyme is okay if it accents the message of the poem but logical progression should be your first aim. I think you could present your feelings and thoughts better here if you were not compelled to conform to rhyme. Just my thoughts and opinion.

[Michael Sameh]

Thanks

[lark1311]

nice write. grave and resonant.