drugs

this s not supposed to be preaching or judging. just an expression about how i c them right or wrong. iv never taken drugs or drunk alcahole and have no desire to.

honestly.

it scares me

the idia

of people being controlled by some stupid chemical

sends a shiver up my spine

just the thought of something 

unatural influencing you

chaneing how you act

its not even the idia of takeing it that scares me

people high of ther head

chatting s**t around me

lafing at nonexistent jokes

all happy and smiling

but i feel i cannot trust them 

i feel like when they take these drugs 

they e no longer the people i know and love

how can i trust a stranger

how can i trust a chemical?

i know most of this is probably crap

but this is what my mind tells me

i know they are still my friends

but it scares me

i ahve seen oh so many people 

broken or hurt by these stupid drugs

everyone drinks

its the norm

even though the dark side of this liquid

is all to plain to see.

my stepdad.

a violent drunk

it was a rare day when i came home to hear silence

come home thanking the heavens there were no shouts in the air

that my mum wasent crying in a corner

eye as black as bear

and its happening again

another boyfiend

allways drunk

allways shouting and cursing

constantly braging about is violent ways

my aunt

a compleat crackhead

an extream i know

gave up everything for her drugs

sacrificed her home her posesions

her sanity and worst of all

her kids

they to will be scared byt his drug. 

scared and yet they have never consumed it

i have no problem if you choose to do these drugs

i wont preach to you about the side affects

or the long term diseases

just be aware

drugs scare me

inside or outside a person

Reviews

[AtticusBlack]

Sorry this is late, been away for a while. Apart from the obvious mistakes, this is a good poem, good message etc. I get your point, the idea of something alien being in your body and controlling your actions is scary, and doesn't seem natural. Sometimes it's a way of escape, but the wrong way.

[Manda]

yes drugs are stupid...unless used for a purpose of course. what a well written poem! great!

[Taylor H.]

i agree with you completly. They are so stupid...I had a best friend become addictied to them very badly. Great poem

[Lottie]

I can't help but wish more people felt this way about it, but I know people have to make there own choices. Its heartbreaking when you watch someone go through it. Thanks for writing this.