i give up

for anyone who gives a s**t

what can i say

there no point

there no f*****g point to this fucked up life

i just wont to give up

throw in the towel

the devil wins. he broken me 

and not a single tear has fallen

not one 

but mine

know one f*****g cares

why the hell would they

is there a point to a life if know one cares for it

if even tee prisoner in this measly body

wonts nothing moor than to break free and leave everything behind

and nothing that he left behind would care

i see no point in a life without love

why carry on when every chance of true happiness that arises if foiled 

foiled by this devil masquerading as out life

well this devil has beaten me

I'm alone

Ive allays been alone

Ill allays be alone

and who cares

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

A deeply emotional piece, stracthng deep into the heartstrings of the writer.
Written with true compassion and pain , a sombre piece of sufferign and unanswered or understood angoy

[Manda]

this was very depressing. what a very emotional write, right here. it brought tears to my eyes. I too though have faced this same situation. it can be very hard going through all this crap and being alone. this was good just a few grammatical errors but there things you can fix easily. mostly spelling errors. well done though!

[James Paulin]

There was a time when I felt rather useless and had to get some help ( Eulogy to a Shrink) so I can hear the message and emotion with empathy. Your poem is excellent in the way it spills out frustration and bitterness. One thing is certain, change is going to happen. A recent movie which also deals with this topic is The Wrestler with Micky Roarke. Another of my favorites is Simon Birch.

[nostal]

Very emotional. The feeling is captured well.
Great job.