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The saying what you see is what you get;

It's a lie.

What you see is definetly not what you get.

People may seem okay on the surface,

But you never know what they could be going through.

 

A dad who gets easily pissed off,

A mom who takes off.

A sister who misses the securities of "home".

A brother who messed up his life on his own,

And then there's that girl.

Who doesn't know what to do and is stuck in the middle,

So does nothing.

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this awhile ago.

Reviews

[Nessa]

I like it. The emotion feels like it's rushing through my body

[Paige Hensel]

you upset me greatly. if you want meaning, try not to swear.
it sounds a lot better. but very deep. i do like it.

[Shadows of Sight]

I agree, not everything is a truth, when we look at it, or when people speak. People wear masks of many colors shapes and sizes. Some do so, because they want to hurt humanity, some dark part of their inner self they must hide.
Others wear masks because they are afraid, of the goodness they see, for they do not have goodness in their own lifes.
Our tears will come, and we shall feel pain in life. But we alone can choose to be more then what society or family tries to conform us to be. Choose, be free, Live. :) Welcome to the WC Friend! :)

[Wolfwind Words]

We all face tough times in life, we all wish that our lot in life was better then fate handed us. We all see that we can't control the causes of our strife. Yet, we all suffer with the same pain in the heart.
I love your emotional cries in this. It was well writen and flowed.
I will ask this, as it was once asked to me. "What are you going to do about it?" For only you can choose to better your situation.
Hope and Prayers to you! :)

[Hide From God]

How true is that. People are never what they seem sometimes. You write with raw emotion, and passion. Most of all you write about what you know and you dont bullshit anything. Very good job, i would love to read more of your writings.