Round one to the midnight kingdom

Round one to the midnight kingdom

A Poem by The Immortal Phoenix
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(Hope you have a comeback)

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Your no chupacabra just a dog with mange

More like something to be killed off by doctor strange

Your a third rate duelist playing with a fourth rate deck

Step back, step back cuz this insults going high tech

Lazer guns loaded like a shotgun click clack, click clack

Cuz unlike the terminator you won't be back.

Your may be  superman but I got the kryptonite

Im the dark night your going to die of fright

You wanna defeat me? Take a number!

You aren't making a scratch by t’under!

Your going to have use the Tardis

To go back and get that dis

You may think my words are cold are brutile,

Well lower your shields cuz your resistance is futile


© 2019 The Immortal Phoenix


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Hey !! Enjoyed reading it . It is very rhythmic . So ,I like it . Keep writing ((smiles)) 😊😊😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


hm. I think this was mean't for some superhero fan. Nothing here strikes at me. Not worth a comeback.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Immortal  Phoenix

5 Years Ago

Ouch, that hurt? Realy though, I tried, Its more of a geek poem. not meant to hurt just entertain. h.. read more
MidnightKingdom

5 Years Ago

definitely was.... enjoyable

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The Immortal Phoenix

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My Name is Micky Gear. I am the immortal Phoenix. You cannot kill me, at this point my biggest fear is myself. more..

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