Diamond key

My dad just got back from jail so this peace is for him about him.

Round here there are only killers and thieves,

so who you gonna be?

We all can talk,

but nobody in here will say who has the diamond key.

Cus in here we all can walk

but aint a one of us free.

In here there are lesions to be learned

and the price of pride and freedom is the only fee.

Too much darkness shrouds the mind and all the thoughts we can not see.

All my secrets made,

tost and lost, like the diamond key.

For I know who had it and I know who lost it,

but not a regret do I spare, for that person was me.

Reviews

[Taniska 😊€..]

Hey at last you came , thanks Mickey for writing this poem . I am getting the sadness behind this poem . Good write , nice flow. Keep writing and keep smiling. ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊😊

[MidnightKingdom]

Just some minor spelling errors, not terrible for those spelling. Very good, the rhyme makes this seem like an upbeat rap. Put some music on this, and you'll have a hit song. The message is nice and I like the diamond key part

[The Immortal Phoenix]

well most my stuff is like that and no it shouldent be stereotypical of me to rap, I just do it.read morewell most my stuff is like that and no it shouldent be stereotypical of me to rap, I just do it.

[MidnightKingdom]

Why would it be stereotypical? And do whatever you want! This is creativity! :D

[The Immortal Phoenix]

Its would be stereotypical of me cus Im African American. but I dont think that matters.

[MidnightKingdom]

no it doesn't matter :) poetry is poetry! I like this, my friend