Who am I ?

As time goes by...
I ponder...
Who am I ?
There are so many questions I wonder


But to this one I have answer,
And it haunts me
Am I a chancer?
As I drown in each memory


Filled with regret
Anger,hate,
No self respect
To much on my plate


Im drowning in a puddle
Life...I don't want it
The continuous struggle
Depression,my habit

I fell so fast noone could catch me
Lost in this ocean
This never ending sea
Filled with so much emotion...


I don't know who I am
I do know I'm lost...

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

You have expressed one of our most basic questions so well.....yes, it causes turmoil, but in the end, once clarity arrives, answers give peace too...:)
Great poetry!

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Levi Levin]

True human struggles indeed. We all experience them. Doing what we enjoy is a marker of success. No matter how simple it is. Great job!

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Fly]

Koi gal nahi ji bas chalte raho & one find day you can find yourself.

[micky]

Thank you ..
:)

[Fly]

Welcome Ji koi gal nahi 👍

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I don't know who I am
I do know I'm lost...

Yes everyone of us feels that way at some point of time in life. Great work!

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Bare trees]

Quiet reflection is often needed. I too ask the question who am I? But I've discovered the question is universal. It echoes across the lands in silence to others but not to the one asking.

[micky]

Thank you :)

[OhSnapShley]

I think everyone can relate to this, we all come to a moment in time when we are lost . Good read.

-OhSnap

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Lovecraft]

Very poignant and introspective. You just have a grammar error in "I fell so fast noone could catch me". Lol, sorry. Still, very good.

[micky]

Thank you lol im dyslexic and grammer and spelling isnt the best lol but thanks

[Lovecraft]

Okay, sorry. :P I'm just somewhat of a grammar and spelling freak, it annoys me when it isn't proper, lol.

[micky]

I do try but something alway slips through lol

[angeleapaugh]

Easy read. I enjoyed it. You do know one thing for certain and that's a start.

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Vaporvision]

I'll start off by saying there were a few grammatical errors... and also, I think you're missing a word in here. "this one I have answer" Perhaps you meant no answer. Otherwise, the actual review: This poem, I can tell, comes from a dark place. Somewhere inside your heart that you dislike, and so instead of letting it out in a way someone else would, you put it through writing. I love that. A search for self. Nobody truly knows what they want until it hits them in the face... What they want for the3mselves, as people... Who they think they are. These days in society, a big matter for some people is to fit in. I'll give anyone who reads this a big piece of advice, though... Especially those in school; Fitting in does NOT matter. Do what you please, and what makes you happy. After high school there is a good chance you won't see any of these people ever again. Make it the best experience for yourself, and don't worry about pandering to other people's needs. Anyway, I liked this poem. Thanks :)

[micky]

Thank you I appreciate it.

[wordman]

we all can relate to this,i wonder who am i

[micky]

Glad you can relate...good to see you too