conflict....

Its been awhile and I'm a bit rusty.

Its been so long,
Since I've written a thing...
The past year every decision I've made has been wrong
As depression grabs hold of me again
Drowning in a puddle
The constant struggle

As the battle with myself goes on,and on and on
Do much self conflict, self hate!
And my days drag on to be so long
As I stand at the devils gate
Watching "him" take pride,
Knowing that this was he's plan all along
With nowhere to hide
I watch my failures gather ,in all my wrong

There's nothing left to do
I could pick up the pieces
But I'll never have enough glue...
I can never straiten the creases!

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Besides some minor grammar and syntax issues ;) it's a well thought out meditation on the conflict within ourselves, both of external and internal natures.

[micky]

Thank you..

[Sami Khalil]

"the battle with myself goes on,and on and on
Do much self conflict, self hate!
And my days drag on to be so long
As I stand at the devils gate
Watching "him" take pride,"

We all go through those battles. Approaches are different as well as outcomes. A powerful write...:).....

[micky]

Thank you so much. ..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Echoes of Eros]

Your words are filled with so many painful colors. Depression is a shadowed monster that seeks to devour all light. May you find endless stars as you pass through this midnight place, dear poet. xo

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words

[SkinlessFrank]

depression is a crafty animal...knowing how to co-exist with it, knowing how to tame it into submission, these are lifelong goals....i wish you well

[micky]

Thank you......

[Bohrium Guy]

Endless loops in life... Very well penned, I felt your words. Thanks for sharing!!

Brat Rat

[micky]

Thank you for the review I really appreciate it

[Bohrium Guy]

Your Welcome!