Broken toys....

Broken toys,
When you`re broken and bruised
All bloody and used
I`ll clean you up,and take you home
I`ll stand by your side,never leaving you alone
Unlike you...
Because that`s exactly what you`ll do
You`ll leave me there all bloody and bruised
Like a broken toy that`s been used
You were never really by my side
When trouble came,you`d tend to hide
Luckily im strong
I see right through you`re wrong
Coz through your exterior is something so frail
All they ever taught you was how to bail
So broken....
Filled with so many words unspoken
As you drown in guilt
Leaving behind all those half built
Buildings...
Just another one of those things
No-one can fix you
But to try is something I`d do
I`d use all my effort...all of me
In the end we`ll both be...
Broken amd bruised
Like broken toys,that were over used

Reviews

[Danie]

This poem really hit me hard as I can relate so much. I could literally feel the emotion pouring out and just made me want to give you a massive hug. Lovely.

[micky]

I'm glad you felt like you can relate :)thank you

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words in this poem were so heart touching that it made me sympathize with you. I can feel and understand the misery one feels when they are feeling lonely. Very well written. I liked it.

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Micky. A true and sad ride in the poetry.
"Broken amd bruised
Like broken toys,that were over used "
The above lines are true for many. Come a time we accept who we are. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you so much for you kind words friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Micky.

[Echoes of Eros]

In each line I felt a painful bleeding of your heart, and yet even in the suffering your soul showed a deep strength to give, to rise above the shadows. May this new year bring some healing to the broken and bruised. xo

[micky]

Thank you so much for the kind words...I really appreciate it

[Echoes of Eros]

This is going to be your year. xo

[BLitZeD]

very very well written .

[micky]

Thank you buddy

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Greatly expressed poem, had much feeling I enjoyed!

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
so much depth and meaning........
powerful words..........
beautifully written......
i loved it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thanks buddy

[Pushkar Prabhat]

always a pleasure Micky.........long time......how have you been?

[micky]

I'm alive lol,yeah almost a year hope u well

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha......i am alive as well........

[Pushkar Prabhat]

back to writing great poems?

[micky]

Trying to reach out for what I tossed yea missed writing hope it will be ok

[Pushkar Prabhat]

good that you are back.......and it will be ok.............
i myself am trying to find my way back..........
this place has also changed a lot

[micky]

It all will take time old friend

[Pushkar Prabhat]

doesn't every good thing..........!!! best wishes to both of us!!! :) :)

[914]

WOW THATS GREAT ,I WAS THINKING TOYS WOW,YEAH I LOVE THIS.

[Akshay Rawal]

This one is a good piece. Keep writing, friend.

*And like I always said, you have your own way with rhyming scales.

[Sunceray]

you inspired me with this one thank you. Painful truth in love and pain of lose.

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words,appreciate them :)