My hands shake

My mind is a complex maze

Filled with monsters and a reply of each bad memory

Everything is in a blurry haze 

I wish it as differently

I spend my night out running my nightmares

Waking with a cold sweat and a pulsing heartache

Spending my day avoiding there blank stares

Hiding my hands that tend to shake 

Hiding the fears within my dark soul

Im nothing more than shattered pieces on the floor 

This gaping whole..

in my chest,Ill never be more 

Ill always just be this broken girl...lost 

Leaving behind broken bridges 

That Iv'e already crossed 

No point in sewing new stitches

Coz Ill never have enough thread 

To broken to care 

Im practically already dead   

As my life goes by in a blare 

And my hands they always shake 

Reminding me im unsteady 

Reminding me of every mistake 

And my heart can't take this weight,its just to heavy 

   

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Wow, beautifully written, besides some grammatical errors. Still, I've felt like this for a long time. Did you peer into my soul and memories? Lol. Only difference is I'm a dude. Very heartfelt and melancholic piece this be. Very good job. *Slow Clap*

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Gregory Stires]

I like this poem very much. i like how dark it is and how well written it is. i also like how it flows smoothly and is like a dam breaking a letting loose waves of emotion that was kept inside.

[Antoñyo]

Wow! I love discovering new talent to read, and there's brilliance here.
Love the flow and rhyme stirred in dark and raw emotion uncluttered by overthought.

Um, I'll be back to read more writing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

dark sad and very personal.........
it is difficult to find the light in all of darkness...........maybe its okay to let go....to fall............don't know waiting for a confirmation myself......i'll let you know....
till then go on......
beautiful.....
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. why the silly spelling mistakes?

[micky]

thank your for the kind words friend,lol because I can't spell in genral

[Vernika]

This left a mark somewhere really deep inside.. Very well written!

[micky]

Thank you so much for ur review

[Mark]

Wow Micky, there is a line that sold me, i guess the reason for the title, the line "Hiding my hands that tend to shake" that is when i went from reading to feeling, nicely done, i have missed reading you, hope all is well

Mark Edward

[micky]

Thank you Mark for the kind review,kind regards friend

[andrew mitchell]

A nice write Micky! dark brooding personal off the cuff from the heart!

[micky]

Than you Andrew for the review I really appreciate it :)

[DeerInHeadlights]

sometimes we find the capability to reach down into the depths of ourselves and pull out exactly what is plaguing us. you have done this so well in this poem, and in a way many will be able to relate to. very personal write..

[micky]

Thank you very much for the kind review

[Sam yay!]

Wow. This is very deep! This poem is beautiful and I encourage you to keep writing. It could be published someday and it is also very relatable.

[micky]

Thank you so much for your kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct thoughts in the poetry.
"And my hands they always shake
Reminding me im unsteady
Reminding me of every mistake
And my heart can't take this weight,its just to heavy "
Hard to hold stress and disappointment. Unsteady mind can be wiser in the proper decisions of living. Thank you Micky for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.