Pause..,

When you emotions cnt keep up with ur mind

Peace is something you will never find 

When your soul is dark 

But you eyes have a certain spark 

When you love to laugh coz if you dnt u might just cry 

When you speak of death,to help you get by 

When you spill all the pain on a blank page

So afraid of this intense rage

You beery under lock and keep

When nights are too long and you cnt sleep

When you wake shaking 

And you aware of every mistake you making 

When you avoid there blank stair 

When voices in you head that tend to Blair 

When you age is a confusing conversation piece 

When a imagination that wont cease

Drives you insane,

And you know how much pain...

 you really cause 

Wishing life could be on pause 

Reviews

[QuayvonS]

I like how you portrayed the poem, you have this very unique way of writing that I feel people should appreciate and accept more.
Nice work!

[micky]

Thank you so much for the kind words

[914]

i do like your writing .'' when you spill all the pain on a blank page''.

[Inject Positivity]

Clappings!!! for your brilliant concept.....Such an amazing title....Very thought provoking too, and the way you have presented the poem is simply beautiful.....Full ratings for the concept and presentation and the overall work.....
Note: I think in the first line 'you' should be 'your' and in the last part of the poem "when you age......" should be "when your age"......

[micky]

Firstly thank you for yet another amazing review i really appreciat ur kind words and ur critics....

[Inject Positivity]

You are always welcome my frnd.....