outlaws

outlaws

A Poem by micky

We were always outlaws 
Between the booze and brawls 
Between the fists and blunts
Out running the hunts 

We were the hunters game
We kept him sane 
Running circles round this world 
As the darkness swirled 

As we crept in his sleep
Leaving with nothing but our bare feet 
Running from tomorrow 
We don't need their sorrow 

We live for the run 
Its our only true fun
We live for the thrill 
We live to give him a chill

We live for the chaise
Our minds a hopeless place 
As the world keeps turning 
And the fire in our souls keep burning 

The rain on my face 
Filling my lungs with smoke,leaving no space
Gasping for air 
but we didn't care 

Breath life into me 
The world is what i wna see
So keep going ...keep moving..regardless what we been through 
Even if we weren't aloud to 

The hunter will never understand 
But thats what makes it so grand 

© 2016 micky


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John Dillinger and Bonnie and Clyde came to mind after reading this. I also thought of Man hunting Man in a jungle or something, which is weird, I guess, lol.

I love this poem, Micky. The thrill of the Chase (Whether Literal or Figurative) is prevalent to me.

The rhymes are good, you don't seem to be trying too hard to do a perfect rhyme scheme, which makes me respect you all the more.

Excitingly stimulating poem, Micky! Another good job from one of my favorite poets around these parts. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


micky

7 Years Ago

Wow !thank you for the awesome review I really appreciate it lol,I don't really try to hard at poetr.. read more
WoW!!!
normal is always boring.........
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesomeness at its best.....Brilliantly thought out and i loved it mate.....Nice title too mate.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


micky

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for all the reviews and ur opinion :)
The life of an outlaw seems much more appealing than the normal persons life. Count me in :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


micky

8 Years Ago

Haha true words Aaron, Thank you for the review
when we`re young we live on edge,it was great times.loved the write

Posted 8 Years Ago


micky

8 Years Ago

Thank you wordman :)

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Added on January 3, 2016
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