99miles

We going round 99m/p hour

the road was our hope 

we were lost,we try to cope

Then the turns went sour

The green hills were to far

The rain pouring down

Thoughts so flooded,we could drown

We were running but we didn't know where we are

Like a never ended nightmare

The car swerved

Your voice was all I heard

My faced just a blank stair

The light faded 

The blood rushed

Our tones hushed 

We never made it 

I thought back as I took my last breath

We were almost happy,ha...we were hopeless

We would have a hectic diagnosis 

It all ended,all the pain.loss...everything ended with death 

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Everything felt like a song, the flow, the fire, the aching dark destiny. Dear poet, you take us on a journey so wishful yet driven toward the edge. Still feeling the crashing, crushing end. xo

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Susheel Sharma]

The fast ride could have been successful a swell. Compose a different one now.

[914]

SLOW DOWN GIRL ,NICE YOUR GONNA BE A FAVORITE HERE.WELL DONE.....

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words I'm so so sorry for the late reply I really appreciate it tho

[wordman]

a sad write for such a young lady !

[micky]

Whats age got to do with it :)... thank you wordman

[wordman]

young people should be out having fun,not depressed.wait a few years it comes naturally ! lol

[micky]

Ive been out and about but the reality is what it is wordman.....besides its the cause of good writing