He was scared

So young on his own
Secretly he was dead and alone
A broken boy trying to be a man
He didnt even have a plan

He faught just to breathe
Even tho all he wanted was to leave
He faught just to stay
Even tho he watched himself faid away

His dad haunted him
But it was just another thing
Another mark on his long lists
Just part of things that scard more than his fists

He arms were damaged,along with his soul
He was a fraction,that will never be whole
He was scared,he was terrified....
There was nowhere to hide

And then just like that it happend,he was gone
He lasted for a while,he was strong...
But not strong enough
Life was just to rough

He got home alone
2am...his name unknown
Wishing he wasnt sober
Realizing he just wanted it over

And then he went at the wall
So frustrated he began to slowly fall
Then he went at his harms,cutting Away
He knew he wouldint make it another day

Then he went at his neck...
slicing away every speck
And then was gone,free from this life
He never had a chance at a kid,a wife

He never knew love
This is why i dnt believe in the one `Above`
Noone cared when he was gone
They found him a month later...it took that long ...

Reviews

[Gregory Stires]

The depth and emotion literaly is sewed into your writing. i love the raw emotion that oozes of it as i read. this poem is not cliche dark but raw truth that makes people think dark poetry or well poetry that tell about the darker apsects happening in life such as this. and i love how you dont sugar coat it but tell it as it in the poem. you wrote the poem so well i felt attached to the boy who had suffered so much. And i like that it is relatable in terms of the subject matter. overall this poem is amazing and i really think you did a terrific job on it.

[914]

YOU WRITE GREAT THE WORDS RUN THROUGH AND TRUE .GREAT JOB