taken back

Taken back
I was drowning in love,
Now I'm drowning in sorrow,

Where is the love,
You let me borrow,

You took it back,
Now I am lost,

What is the price,
What is the cost,

The cost is tears,
In cold late nights,

After all the kisses,
And all the fights,

You've finally given up,
You've finally given in,

It was only false love,
Now my own true sin,

Reviews

[JMaster1]

Your words are so painful and powerful , you are a true poet , you write from your heart

[Bohrium Guy]

I felt your emotions in this piece. Your words painted a nice picture of how you felt and your mood. You did an excellent job of creating the expression and moving the reader. Good job!

~Rob~

[micky]

Wow thank you soo much

[wordman]

love and loss,they seem to go had in hand great write
don`t see you much anymore

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words
:) yeah been busy lately

[Echoes of Eros]

How your words are flooded with the painful darkness of all that remains of love. May your heart only find healing and light, and a love that never has an end; only new beginnings. xo

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

good adhesion to structure. i think the more complex the idea the harder it is to pull off. thanks for writing

[micky]

Thank you so much for the review :)

[wordman]

my pleasure