i love you but...

This is far to hard to say
You helping me find my way
Is great and all
But I guess every now and then I fall
And collapse..
The scars are maps
Of where I been
Every scar means something
My mind haunting me
The reflecting a reminder of what I use to be
I'm trying to move on
But it's hard to be strong
Even harder to pretend there's nothing wrong
The days are far to long
The room walls drown me..In my own fear
Don't get me wrong I love being here
But I got issues...and I'm scared

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I love the honesty of your words
to confess to ones weakness

is strength

[Inject Positivity]

Another beautiful one frnd....Your words feels very smooth and catchy and always provokes thoughts....I love the way you kept it simple and attached your poetic mastery....Lovely as always.....

[micky]

Thank yuo for the beautiful review friend :)

[Bohrium Guy]

I have to agree with the other reviewers. I have also been in this place and relate well. You done a great job in your visual imagery and composition. Excellent write!

~Rob~

[micky]

Thank you so very much,im so sorry for the late reply

[Bohrium Guy]

Better late then never....

[micky]

Hehe Thank you regardless,,,happy new years :)

[Bohrium Guy]

Yes it is and same to you Micky

[Rajat malik]

It's so beautifully crafted.....trying to show your pain within words but not being able to tell them.

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

True and powerful words.
"The scars are maps
Of where I been
Every scar means something "
I agree. Scars are maps and if we pay attention. We can learn from them and show the person the way to healing. I like the honest tone of the poetry and the good ending. Thank you Mickey for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Wow thank you for the review and kind words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.

[micky]

aww thanks coyote:)

[micky]

aww thanks coyote:)