Bathroom floor

I let the blade seap in, give me inspiration
And the blood seap out
I shout..
In frustration

Let it drop down my arm...drip, drip
Let this blade kill me
Let this blade set me free
For my heart has taken its last rip

Watch the blood drip to the bathroom floor
Cut deeper...
Up my arm, the blade goes steaper
Until I am no more ...

Reviews

[BLitZeD]

nice rhythm and rhymes where solid in this one

[micky]

Thanks lion king :)

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a really strong piece, and you feel the pain throughout this write! I love it! :)

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words Serena

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
this is creepy weird and awesome!!!!
God you write so well............
beautiful dark poem.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[micky]

Wow thank you Pushkar :)

[Daughter of Darkness]

This is amazingly awesome. It's depressing and shows your pain. Seriously,this poem makes me want to cry for you. Your very talented.

[micky]

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

[dead scribe]

Well written, I'm a fan of depressing writing, and I can relate to suicidal thought... I enjoyed the choice of words, especially at the end of this poem

[micky]

Thank you for the review....I'm glad u like my style of writing:)

[AaronFreitas]

Powerful write about cutting. Definitely a tragic ending. Good powerful words my friend :)

[micky]

Thank you Aaron for checking out my piece and reviewing :)

[marcus]

Powerful!! Awesome!!!!!!!

[micky]

Thank Marcus ')