when love arrives

when love arrives

A Poem by micky

You came down and saved me
You wrap your arms across my shoulders

You were there for the storm,you helped me move the boulders
You showed me how to be happy

Left breathless gasping for air
These wings lift me to the sky
You dried the tears i would often cry
Even now your still there

You bring me joy,watch my fear fade
You cast away the darkness,with only shadows of us dancing together
Im not saying this is forever
Im not saying we have it made

Coz maybe love shouldn't be forever,always...
wasn't meant for me
But maybe thats how is should be
I will cherish our days,
 
But when love needs to leave
I will say go,enjoy life
and even though i was bread to be a wife
I will accept love needs room to breathe 

Coz you my love...will always be welcome in my arms
when you leave,i will leave the door open
Our love stories will be spoken 
I will tell the world of your charms

I'll tell the world how you saved me
How whenever im in need,your there
How all you give is love,affection,and care
Coz love is like a baby...

Its there for a time but it will grow up and go,but just like your kids love will come visit 

© 2015 micky


Author's Note

micky
This Is for a very special person whom is close to my heart, Licha means more than most people to me, I love her with all my heart

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Thank you for sharing the beautiful and hopeful poetry for love.
"Coz you my love...will always be welcome in my arms
when you leave,i will leave the door open
Our love stories will be spoken
I will tell the world of your charms"
I like the good flow of thoughts and the positive tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote for taking the time to read my piece
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.



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This poem is lovely and sweet. I love the line: "when you leave, i will leave the door open." That's the closest to my heart because I'm waiting for someone. :) Thank you for writing this piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The way you express love is so beautiful and giving. So many eyes see love as ending; as dying. But you find a way to make love last forever, even in the distance, even in the freedom of life. This is real love; powerful, unending love, and it inspires me so much. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much for the amazing ad kind words i really appreciate it
:P
That's just a beautiful piece of writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
Thank you for sharing the beautiful and hopeful poetry for love.
"Coz you my love...will always be welcome in my arms
when you leave,i will leave the door open
Our love stories will be spoken
I will tell the world of your charms"
I like the good flow of thoughts and the positive tone of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

micky

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote for taking the time to read my piece
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.

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