If the shoe fits?..

You never think its going to be you

until that day...

That day your foot fits the shoe

Until the moment your concentration begins to sway

When your'e problems weigh you down   

When your'e shoulders cant bare anymore 

When your head is to heavy from your crown

When you lose you morals,waking up on a strangers floor

You lost now...

Never to be found

You would question "How?"

But your mouth is to dry to make a sound

Withdrawal...

Shakes...

 The bugs begin to crawl...

Your mind racing,your heart aches

Disappointment...Shame...

questions...Pain...

Self hatred...a sick little game...

Left with nothing...ONCE again...

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

"You never think its going to be you
until that day...
That day your foot fits the shoe
Until the moment your concentration begins to sway"

No more truer words than that Micky. I have been there and can totally relate. A very nice write my friend.... my pleasure to review :)

[micky]

Thank you Aaron...

[AaronFreitas]

My pleasure :P

[mayankverma]

a good read micky , its kinda deep (y)

[micky]

Thank you....:)

[Haley Wilson]

I think many people could easily relate to this, as it is so raw and honest. I also agree with the other person saying this piece could be read over and over. :)

[micky]

Awwww...thank you soo much Haley:)

[alan peter kelly]

I've been there...long time ago...nowadays the worst of anything that can happen is the best of what happened on the worst day living in rock bottom...population me...i personally perfered to detox cold turkey...believing that not only did i deserve the self inflicted consequence of my actions but going cold turkey was to remind me of how one must pay for the choices one makes. Enjoyed the read...even though it kinda took me back...reminded me..the mark of a successful write x.

[micky]

Thanj you sooo much Alan i know cold turkey is harsh but it was all that would work....thanks Alan

[alf]

Hi micky. A really deep and meaningful write!! This feels like it comes from the heart and oozes emotion. there are several spelling typos but despite them the poem travels in the same jerky leaps and bounds I would expect to find in a poem about this subject. Love the format you have chosen . . . it highlights the pain, giving your words huge impact. A great write, alf

[micky]

Wow thank you Alf for the amazing and beautiful review.....thanks so much Alf

[alf]

Every word said, is meant and very worthy of my review, alf

[sereenaoutloud]

so very true, you never do think it is going to happen to you ! this is a great write Micky!!

[micky]

Thank you soo much sweety...:)

[marcus]

I feel that. Great poem, I love it!
I think lines 5 and 6 should be your, not your'e

[micky]

Wow thank you Marcus...:)

[andrew mitchell]

Micky Micky Micky such a lovely write you have shared. Beautiful! :) Which brings me to the next question Why did cinderella lose her shoe if it fitted perfectly in the first place? Life's puzzles!!!!!

[micky]

Good question Andrew,thank you for the kind words

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome i like your writes

[micky]

Thank you once again:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes I agree. Old age show us. We will know bad and good day. Life teaches us. Nothing worthwhile is easy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

This is written well, and the message is straight forward and bold!
I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[micky]

Thank you James...:)

[Passengerr]

beautiful write-up Micky. i could read it over and over again.

[micky]

Thank you so much:)