Suddenly...

Crashing down into the same old pot hole

Headed straight for a dead end

No hope left for me...

Suddenly the world shifts,losing self control

 He was an old friend

My heart on the loose,but he found it maybe?

Heart racing,can't keep up with the pace

Face blushing

knees weak..

When did love become a race?

Is the ice around my soul crushing?

Did I finally find what I seek?

 Fear fills me,including insecurity

Butterfly's in my stomach,fire in my cheeks

maybe im a diamond in the rust?

This boy loves me,

Its in the way he speaks 

I know this isn't just lust...

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Its a smiler:):):) such a beautiful warm poem Micky

[Sami Khalil]

Suddenly you speak love and your readers knees become weak. Very lovely...:)...............

[micky]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Jimmy Yetts]

An eloquent and heartfelt plea for true love and genuine devotion.
Hope this is the boy you're looking for; if not, may you find him, soon.
Nice bit of work, Micky!

[micky]

I hope.so to ...tjank you so much for the kind words

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
beautiful poem...........
such passionate emotions......
very well written.....
i loved it!!!!
:)

[micky]

thank you soo much :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are most welcome!!! :) :)

[micky]

Thank you, your a inspiration

[Pushkar Prabhat]

that is an honor.........thank you so much........!!! :) :)

[micky]

No thank you :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

okay..... :D you are welcome....... ;D ;D

[Zoomout]

This is Amazing! the most beautiful love poem I read for long time and it feels so real

[micky]

I had someone amazing to right about...im glad you like it

[mayankverma]

A beautiful piece of art. reminded me of something

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Kim_poet76]

Very beautiful poem about love. I really liked it.

[micky]

Thank you so much,,,,,,,,its actually my first love poem

[Kim_poet76]

It's outstanding. You are very gifted. :)