Suddenly...

Crashing down into the same old pot hole

Headed straight for a dead end

No hope left for me...

Suddenly the world shifts,losing self control

 He was an old friend

My heart on the loose,but he found it maybe?

Heart racing,can't keep up with the pace

Face blushing

knees weak..

When did love become a race?

Is the ice around my soul crushing?

Did I finally find what I seek?

 Fear fills me,including insecurity

Butterfly's in my stomach,fire in my cheeks

maybe im a diamond in the rust?

This boy loves me,

Its in the way he speaks 

I know this isn't just lust...

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful words Micky... very powerful :)

[micky]

Thank you Aaron....:)

[An owl on the moon]

There's such a beautiful understanding of love in your words... and of the pain that too often comes with loving... Your last lines made me smile... sensing the wonder of real love.. of deep love coming into your life... :)

[micky]

Wow thank you soo much thats the best review ive gotton in a long time....thank you for the kind words

[An owl on the moon]

So glad you're here sharing your inspirations. :)

[micky]

Awww thank you....:)

[Michael Stevens]

Powerful and excellent--I hope it turns out exactly as you'd hope!

[micky]

Thank you....things arnt really but guess u got to wheather the worst

[Michael Stevens]

I'm sorry to hear that, but yes, you've got to weather the worst.

[micky]

Thanks so much Mikey_)

[Michael Stevens]

You bet; and let's hope for better weather ahead, huh?

[micky]

Lets hope.....:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if we have suffered enough pain in life from love, we do surround our heart with ice....we get too fearful to trust and love.

[micky]

I Agree with you....thank you for the review :)

[alan peter kelly]

Love is sweet
at sixteen
hearts and flowers
forevers and evers
until forever
becomes
whatever
and another teen
angst tragedy
we build up
an eventual
immunity
but never
stop loving
never stop saying
it's
forever.

[micky]

Hahah your probably right...except he isnt a teen...but thank you for the awesome review :)

[alan peter kelly]

WHAT?!!!!!*takes out shotgun from its cabinet and loads it with buckshot* ha ha youre welcome Micky (hugs)

[micky]

Hahah i know shocking moments Alan haha hugs to you lets just hope it will last :) thank you Alan

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I like it, It's a romantic love beyound of lust. Thank you for sharing.

[micky]

Thank you so much

[sereenaoutloud]

so beautifully written, that first love,,,is it real or lust? the hesitation.. all summed us so nicely in this brilliant pieces. Love the photo too super cute!! :)

[micky]

Thank u soo much sweetheart:)

[alf]

Hi micky. this is so softly written, and so much more romantic because of that. I love that cautious reach for happiness, the thought process that took you there. this is beautiful!!! alf

[micky]

Thank you so much Alf :)

[Matching Socks]

Gorgeous poem Micky! Love has a way...

[micky]

Thank you so much Anna :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome!

[samanthaashley_]

wow. interesting in many ways. I really like the driving metaphors theme.

[micky]

Thank you so much (^^,)