Sincerely your broken son...

He was sixteen

Barely a heart,

people viewed him as a machine

And that wasn't even the sad part

He never had a broken household

He wasn't a spoiled child and his behavior was fine

 He wasn't shy or bold

And yet his parents never had the time

A boy raised by a Nannies,soon to be left on his own

A boy unnoticed in school

His parents chose to be distant and leave him alone

His parents were cruel 

A boy afraid of life

A boy afraid of his own feeling

A boy simple afraid

A boy who will never have a wife

A boy who never knew the meaning...

to be saved

With his parents late to his funeral

 His Father saying "He took the easy way out"

"He was no man"

Witch is a bit brutal

Considering you left me no other rout

Considering  you're less than...

a man me, your son 

Now I hope you walk away with shame

This conversation may be done...

But know my death is on your hands.May you feel my pain

Sincerely your broken son... 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You took the reader on a sad journey in the words. This does happen a lot. Reaction to situation too late leaving sadness and regret. I like the feel of letter in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you for the kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[marcus]

this one brought a tear to my eye!

[marcus]

wow! your poems really touch me.

[micky]

Thank you so much Marcus....i am so glad u enjoyed one of my poems

[Shawna]

Micky, your poem seriously left me with goose bumps. The saddest part is that this is all too common. Many kids fall through the cracks and they pain is never detected. Thank you for taking us through this sad journey, if only to remind us to be ever open to the people around us.

[micky]

Thank you for the review i appreciate it :)

[Malister Mikey]

Suicide is never the easy way out it actually takes more strength to kill yourself than many think, people cling to life no matter how hard it gets, however I do disagree with him in the regards to who's the blame. It was the character's choice to take his own life not the choice of his father. To try as your final act to make someone miserable for the rest of their life is what you choose then you obviously were not all that good of a person. The death is on his hands and his alone for we all make decisions and we must be willing to suffer the consequences of such actions. That all being said I did enjoy your poem despite the fact I disagree with the character in it, this poem is well written and easy to grasp. Great Job!

Suggestions: boy raised by a Nannies (You should take out the a)

Sincerely, Malister Mikey

[Eleanor]

This is packed with emotions. Sometimes kids are not able to communicate with their parents and it results to a really bad ending. All they ask is love, which they don't get. There are a few typos but if ignored, this is a lovely and heart touching poem. If this is what you feel than just know one thing- It would all be better. We all would find someone one day and realize why it didn't work out with others. I promise everything will be okay. Be strong.
Thank you for sharing this :)

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Angel Alli]

Thank you for sharing this poem. It has really touched me. A few months after my father died when I was 15, my ex-boyfriend committed suicide and I became depressed. I often wonder if I could have done something more to help him and to show him that I, his family, and so many of his friends cared.

[micky]

Thank you Angel :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sad honest and heartfelt.........
i am sorry for your loss......
maybe now he will find peace and maybe some acknowledgement, appreciation and love in the next life.....
beautifully crafted.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Ashira Macy]

Something tells me that this one relates to the other one of yours that I just read, "Hate". I could be wrong, but either way I am sorry for the loss of your friend. Suicide does not just effect the person who commits it, it effects everyone around them. A few typos I saw and corrected (corrections are in parentheses):

A boy raised by a Nann(y),soon to be left on his own

A boy simpl(y) afraid

(Which) is a bit brutal

Considering you left me no other (route)

Really well done my friend.

[micky]

They are connected his parents never had the time and everywhere he went he was misunderstood. Thank you so much Ashira for the review:)