Hate

I'm afraid that it's too late

I wanted to show you something better

I promise I never meant for you to go though this

Please remember the time when I was your best mate

I still have your favorite sweater 

I hoped when I saw you, we could reminisce 

I remember the way you used to smell

The way you used to walk

 The way you used to laugh 

I remember the way you used to ring my door bell

The way you would keep me up til 4am just to talk

Do you remember when everyone called you my second half?

But I guess we just grew apart

We got older, you moved away

Time went on

Although you remained in my heart

And to be honest, No! I'm not okay

But it's my turn be strong

So now...

Here I stand, feet facing your grave

Wish I could say my goodbye

Well I wish I knew how?

I wish I could be brave...

But all I seem to do is cry

I will live with regret...

Knowing our last words to one another ended with HATE

I will never get to express my sincerity

Luckily you left a note signed FORGET

Telling me it wasn't to late

Telling me you except my apology

Telling me that you still Loved me...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Luckily you left a note signed FORGET
Telling me it wasn't to late
Telling me you except my apology

Telling me that you still Loved me.."
Regret. A hard thing to grasp. I like the story leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you so much I really am glad you enjoyed my piece

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your poetry.

[Ashira Macy]

This was like a punch in the gut for me because I am going through a similar situation with a former best friend of mine. I am worried that with the things she is getting in to I will soon be standing at her grave wishing things could have been different. You did an outstanding job on this Micky, and I am so sorry for your loss. Thank goodness for the note. I really liked how you set up your rhymes in this one too. Brilliant all the way through.

[micky]

Thank you so much Ashira I really appreciate the review it is really great to hear from you, best of luck with your friend

[AprilRN1210]

I admit.. this one hit me... it hit me hard... I recently lost my little brother in a sudden tragic car accident and I never got to tell him goodbye.. that I loved him... this really tugs on the heartstrings Micky... well done... I really cannot fault anything here.. you are getting good!!!

[micky]

I am so sorry for your loss April I lost a friend a long time ago and in truth it doesn't get easier only accepting the truth dose. I am truly sorry April but I am sure you know that he died with love in his heart and may you see one another in the next life HUGS. Thank you for the amazing review and know you will always have a friend in me

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you Micky.. and same goes for you.. (you WILL ALWAYS have a friend in me)... ((hugs)) back at you.. and you are more than welcome.. it is always a pleasure..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sad story...........tragic!!
well written....
conveys the emotions very well....
emotional poem!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[micky]

Thank you Pushkar

[Tara Togoland]

Wow! I love the twist and turn of events, the idea is awesome.

[micky]

Thank you so much Tara :)

[Rene Salinas]

I htink you intended to say: Telling me, that you doaccept my apology. It is a tricky moment when someone departs only to realize that they leave in anger based on unfinished businesss. Of course one could wish hat things were different, so in here it seems that it did reach that moment were forgivness and moving on took place. Even after hardships the acceptance through love remianied.

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you so much Rene.

[Angel Alli]

I really love the idea and story of this poem. To me, the first half seems to flow a little awkwardly but this gets better half way through.

[micky]

Thank you so much