What you do

If only you saw my personality as a indication

If only you understood 

If only you would end this feud 

You are the reason I prefer isolation

I would change this if I could

But why must you be so rude?

You started this

You never appreciate me

You never even try

You're just to serious

Why must you be so gutsy?

Must you always lie?

What will happen to you...

when I'm not around?

Would you make it ?

What could you do?

Suddenly you don't make a sound

Why so quiet? ...Lets start anew

Lets begin again

Please don't make me ask twice

Please I am just tired...

tired of this game

One day you will pay the price...

For getting me so wired

 

Reviews

[TokiLoki]

This is very straight forward and angry, i don't mean it in a bad way at all just saying there is a lot of emotion i can feel it! I enjoyed reading this and with every new piece i read i get more and more attached to your work. This like many before this was written very nicely! Thank you for the good read

[micky]

Thank you so much I am glad you enjoyed this piece

[Mikayla_Stagg]

Very straight forward. Love all the emotion. The poem was great. Love it

[micky]

thanks alot :)

[Tara Togoland]

Lol. This piece carries pure raw emotions, simple words but great message. Kudos.

[micky]

Thank you so much

[Malister Mikey]

Very well expressed and has a great flow, a really good piece

[micky]

Thank you Mikey I am so glad you read this piece it's one of those pieces that come from the heart

[Malister Mikey]

well you did an excellent job on expressing it

[AprilRN1210]

I can feel the pain, the confusion, the longing, and the anger... you do well with expressing your emotions Micky... your writing is improving so much, the flow of this is nice.. it does feel a little contradictory to me... sometimes it is hard to understand how others can treat someone they care about so cruelly and while we are hurting we try to figure it out.. sometimes internalizing and making it about us... sometimes, it is best to just talk to them... ask them the questions.. quickest way to find out something and if more lies, then well you are no worse off, because that was part of the problem in the first place.. that just makes decisions from there easier.. ((hugs)) Micky.. nice job..

[micky]

Thank you April but this poem is written for my dad and sister they never seem to get along... ;)

[AprilRN1210]

well, that is understandable and happens.. still recommend that communication.. easiest way to solve things :)
nice to see you!

[micky]

I miss you April:) Well my family isn't really best with communication

[AprilRN1210]

I can understand that.. awww very sweet as always my friend ((hugs)) to you!!

[Rene Salinas]

Lately Micky a lot of wondering. Walking the labyrinth I see. The twisted barrel of despair? Oh my, I could keep going with the metaphors but one thing that never fails to come back to me when reading some of your writings is that if you try hard you will find answers. Is great to wonder in search for an answer as long as it doesn't keep you from realising what is happening around you.

Hope you find them

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you Rene I really appreciate the review :)