The unexpected

   

     Just one moment is all it took ...

  to loose it all 

She destroyed this man

It started with her daring look

Suddenly he began to fall

 And so his horror story began

He thought there was nothing to describe her beauty  in his eyes

She moved with grace

Intoxicating him with every movement

Just waiting for the moment he dies

Slowly kissing his face

While he thinks of this improvement

She believes the moment has come

She has won this fight

But darling this is where you are wrong

For this tale is not done

This broken man will live another night

But her life in hell will be long

Since this broken man is the devil himself

He will never fall...

for tricks or games

This is not a man who wants wealth

This is a man feared by all

For this is a man with much bigger aims

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

And cue the Imperial March. Dun...dun...dun... dun da dun... dun da dun! Surprised you put a pic of Darth Maul up there instead of Vader, but I thought it was really cool that you wrote a Star Wars poem. It is the first I have seen, and I loved it!

[micky]

Thank you so much Ashira I love star wars so it's like tribute to there awesomeness :)

[Lauriegirl]

This is very imaginative. well done

[micky]

Thank you Laurie :)

[Malister Mikey]

I enjoyed this story good job

[micky]

Thank you ;)