I'm sorry

I'm sorry...

I'm sorry for never being there

For never really showing that I care

For letting you fall 

For keeping up my protective wall

 For never taking your side

That I always lied

These are the things I wished you would say

but tomorrow will be a new day

We will forget all 

We will get up from that horrific fall

We will pretend like we care

We will pretend like we still have our flair

"I'M SORRY" was never meant for this, for 'us'

Author's Note

For one of my favorite books

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

This is a great message about not living in the past. I believe a lot of what happens to us is beyond our control, good and bad, and it is important to move on, and allow ourselves to forgive others, and our own mistakes. Great piece, easy to read, good flow and great subject matter!

[micky]

Thank you for your wonderful review I am glad you like it :p

[Coyote Poetry]

I could feel the honest words and emotion in the poem. Words are needed to be spoken. Even if too late. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you Coyote for all the wonderful reviews I really appreciate them :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I like your poetry. Old fashion feel.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

honest, innocent and positive poem!
nice job!
i liked it.
:)

[micky]

Thank you for your review

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!
:)

[AprilRN1210]

I really enjoyed this.. it is meaningful and moving.. you can feel the emotion in the lines.. the flow was really pleasant and helped build the momentum for the ending.. some of the rhymes did feel a little "forced" but overall was really nice.. loved the message in it.. honest, relate-able, and touching.. well done!

[micky]

Thank you so much April

[Rene Salinas]

This is one of those words that has been condemned into exile. It is so easy to say it. Some would think is a reflex. So when people say it it hardly brings about re - generation or moving on if one wants. In some cases the person to whom you are saying to might even say; yes , yes but do you mean it?

Savour the moment and be warn ! this is one of those moments as if the chessboard would be infront of you and you see a very obvious move you are about to do it as it is so obvious and suddenly , hold on a minute and then you see ......

The last sorry in this writing sounds more convincing that the first one.

Very touching Micky

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you Rene for the lovely review. As I grew up my parents told me to only say things when I mean them so when people don't I feel like this poem.

[Lauriegirl]

this is such a deep and heartfelt piece..I can feel the emotion driving every line

[micky]

Thank you so much Laurie