My darling...

My darling...

You look at me like i'm nothing but weak

You look at me like I make your world bleak

But the truth is you did this to me

Now this is my world and i'll never be free

When this life is done

I will be the victories one

I will be standing while you fall

I will run while you crawl 

For you were always my demon   

My darling...   

Reviews

[D.L]

I've read through a few of your poems and this is my favourite so far. I love the feeling you put into the word "darling." It just feels perfectly sarcastic.

[micky]

Thank you D.L I really appreciate you reviews ;}

[Roger Turgeon]

I think you mean "victorious" not "victories" . Demon and darling at the same time. Things that attract us are also the things that upset us.

[micky]

Yes and thank you for the review

[Jordan Varner]

i like this. i can relate to it a lot. very well spoken. :)

[micky]

Thank you so much i'm glad you like it :)

[Jordan Varner]

anytime :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Remind me of a good country song. When you are long gone. I will dance and sing. I could add to this amazing use of words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you at least one person liked this piece ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Need some music and we could have a good country song. Demons, escape, add whiskey and a story. Could be a perfect tale.