Emotional Masochist

I'm a romantic, emotional masochist, my lovely killer

You twirl me around your little finger

And wrap me in a Comforting and consticting embrace,

 you sweet, sweet viper

I willingly enter this damask and dark dance

Spining in your lies,

taking comfort in this familiar pain you so sweetly bring to me

Shall I thank you, or hate you?

I honestly do not know, my fallen angel

 

You make my heart bleed beautifully

You're my bittersweet candy bar;

Leaving an awful taste in my mouth

But an eternal longing in the shattered remains of my glass heart

 

I'm your captured princess

And your my enticing tormentor

You are the fire that burns and consumes

And I am just the pyro that wants one more taste

of that delicious heat.

Shall I love you or loath you

I think I shall do both, my alluring tyrant

You wouldn't have it any other way

In this sickly sweet game we always seem to play

Author's Note

Thanks for reading. Coments and critiques always welcome. God Bless
-Lost in Wonderland

Reviews

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Conflicting emotions have served you well in this amazing poem :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) God bless

[Wondering Mind]

the mixed emotions are captured very well and clear in this. Nicely done

[ShelWars]

This is brilliant! It is amazing and deep in it's own way.

[Jazmen]

This is a really great piece you've written. I love how down to earth it is.
Your way piecing the structure together has done wonders to the flow. All the while it's written seemingly so naturally, as if it could be spoken. It's beautiful.
Really glad you wrote this. I'm sure your experience can be an awesome common ground for many readers. Great writing.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

I love the conflicting emotion. This is so good! I love your use of vocabulary as well. Very well written and very original.

[Rhea752]

i love the poem it conveys a sense of hate and longing at the same time great write

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Shall I love you or loath you

I think I shall do both, my alluring tyrant

You wouldn't have it any other way

In this sickly sweet game we always seem to play
.................beautiful lines. I like the way of your writings. Some places it is too short. My best wishes.

[Belle]

Very nicely written. The desperation is conveyed deeply through the poem. I enjoyed it alot.

[Drowning with Stars]

Precise yet vast, and very deep. It's perfect.