Until My Last Breath

Love is a broken dream

Stupid if we think logically

But I,

I live in a fantasy

So I'll keep chasing that deam

Though my brain screams

"Let it be!"

My heart has taken over

Leading me to certain death

But I'll keep chasing love

Until my very last breath

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

I love the idea of love. It's so beautiful. I hope I'll fall in love someday, with someone who loves me. Hmmmmmmmm. So romantic!

Thanks for the review! I tried very hard to get into the phantom's head and become him for a while!

[Drowning with Stars]

I love love love this, it's so positive and light and uplifting :)

[Otsana]

This poem actually made me go "awwwww" because it is so cute. I love the optimism because it is so easy for us to give up on love when we have been hurt but you obviously haven't. I think it is admirable how you manage to create so much beauty in so few lines. However, I believe that on line five you meant "dream". Other than that this is another great write.