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A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

I must not have what I want,

It simply cant be done.

But how-how?- can I contain this love

It forces my heart to pump

Faster

and faster still

For only one name

That I cannot say

 

But oh

Oh how I yearn-

How I need-

To leap into you arms,

To be enveloped by your warmth,

To have you hold me close…

 

But I cannot have what I want and need

Because you are not mine to have

I only wish you’d return something to me,

You have my heart

Will you ever give it back?

© 2011 Lost in Wonderland


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Mickey, this is beautiful. It has heart and soul and it's just really amazing.
Also, I like the last stanza (I'm not a poem person so... stanza, paragraph, whatever) The last two lines are just sort of heartbreaking, and it just goes really well with the story. I really enjoyed it! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Absolutely stunning. I love your style and can't wait to sit down and read more later! You are truely amazing with language and express things in a clear understandable and heart wrenching way. Thanks for posting!

Posted 13 Years Ago


what a beautiful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ahhh, this is incredible.
It's breathtaking and heartbreaking and pure genius.
Absolutely beautiful. Stunning write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Mickey, this is beautiful. It has heart and soul and it's just really amazing.
Also, I like the last stanza (I'm not a poem person so... stanza, paragraph, whatever) The last two lines are just sort of heartbreaking, and it just goes really well with the story. I really enjoyed it! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it. I felt the fantasy in the second stanza as I read it

Posted 13 Years Ago



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