Appart from the fairies

Trapped on the inside

looking out

pressing my fingers to the cool glass

otherwise known as my cage

It locks me away from the fairies

the princes

the magic

and the pain

but I can take the storm if it leads me to a rainbow

 

But Right now I'm trapped inside

a repunzle in my own body,

my own world!

Only finding releif at my pen

 

I'm trapped inside of logic

rules

and norms

when all my eyes will ever see

are the fairis

 

Reviews

[Susanna F]

This is a lovely and heartbreaking piece, and reminds me very much of my teen years. Your ability to capture emotions with images is the mark of a true poet, I think! A few corrections in the last two verses: Rapunzel, relief, and your final word, fairies. Other than that, perfect!

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

One of your best! I love this one an can relate to it so well ;) Great write! :)

[J Kiplinger Young]

the final stanza contains a couple spelling errors. Trapped and logic.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Every one, u can veiw more of my writting under the mane of MickeyM