Neverland

Peter Pan!
Come here,
Come as fast as you can
Won't you take me away to Neverland?

We can dance through the trees
Full of childlike glee
Bird song carried by the breeze
Look at all the fairies!

Peter,
My young prince,
What is there to miss?
Never growing up,
Never getting old
If you're a salesman
Then I'm sold!

Why would I want to stay
Another second
Another day?
Here there are tears and blues
In Neverland there are only dream come trues!

I'm tired of the worry and strife
Take me to a better life
Where magic is real
And people can fly
And no one ever dies
So we never have to say goodbye

So come on Peter Pan!
There are a thousand adventures to be had
If you take me to Neverland

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland

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DalainaRenee

That has always been one of my favorite stories as a child! And I enjoyed this poem. Creative!! Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you:) God bless

lirique

gosh this poem defines what i want - to never grow up, to forget all my worries, to live life for its simple pleasures.

you have truly inspired magic with your words.

(would really appreciate it if you could please take a look at my story :) )

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much:) and I will check out you story as soon as I can, God bless!

12 Years Ago

Thanks!:)

Forever Hidden

Takes me back when I was a kid + reminds me of my childhood!

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Basically, loved it!

12 Years Ago

Why thank you:) I'm glad! God bless

Yina

Oooo I really like this:) I love the rhythm!:) It's so dream-like:)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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12 Years Ago

You have a beautiful voice, btw:)

12 Years Ago

Thank you:))

12 Years Ago

Seyi Ojenike

I love this poem... Its a nice one, gives me the image of a dreamland

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you:) God bless

Tai Ryens

Magical adventure out of a strife-filled life into the lands where age tends not to exist! If only reality were that easy, hehe. I love a couple of the statements you make here, especially the "I'm sold!" one.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)

Dean Kuch®

What a whimsical fantasy adventure you whisked me away on with this piece! Wouldn't it be nice to be able to fly, as Peter Pan, Wendy, John and Michael Darling do in J.M. Barrie's story? Let's all go to NeverLand...

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, and I would love to go to neverland haha:) God Bess

C.A. Lucas

This is great! I absolutely LOVE your rhymes and your general subjects! I am a fan! Keep on writing this great poems, I will read them ;-)

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Aww thank you!! I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff to return the favor of these kind revie.. read more

Rose of Gondor

Haha, how I felt and how I still feel now. :D I LOVE Peter Pan, cause he's so fun. Daring with that wit and that twinkle in his eye, I just know, with him around, there would be adventures EVERY day. And sometimes I want adventures. I wanna go to NEVERLAND!!! So I still open my window every night, and before I go to bed tell someone a story....