A Single Tear

A Single Tear

A Poem by Aly~RaWRs

A single tear

is a small sad reminder

or the breaks he did

to his oldest daughter

her single tear

runs down her cheek

as the promise made breaks

the promise meant to be keep

a single tear

is a small sad reminder

that makes the oldest daughters

heart weep

© 2009 Aly~RaWRs


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I like the theme but your tenses need attention as does your spelling
It is always wise to spell check and re edit before posting

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2009
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Aly~RaWRs
Aly~RaWRs

Oviedo, FL



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i'm Alycia. i'm a freshmen at Crooms AOIT i'm an artist and writer i'm going out with the best guy ever Tomas i am a scene person i love writing stories and poems techno and screamo music are th.. more..

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