Sand

Sand

A Poem by Hviske

sand

we fell through the cracks

we shifted time

destroyed empires

knawed away at buildings

slithered through dunes

gritty and dry

yet were so small

fit in the palm of your hand

insignificant yet powerful

streching out over miles and miles

we populate the seas

swallowing quick

yet were not sand 

we are humanity

© 2011 Hviske


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you write beautifully

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago



Your poem settles like silt within the mind; a very unique and emotive work.

Nicely done...!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this it is direct and compact I write in a similar manner though I use rhyme and rhyme Bu the point well made and eloquent

Posted 13 Years Ago



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