Morning Bird

My Morning Bird

You are my song

Skin as soft as feathers

Eyes as bright as the stars

...

My Morning Bird

My spring breeze

My summer night

My autumn twilight

My winter snow

...

My Morning bird

We sleep in your nest

Tangled and Intertwined like twigs

We sleep in perfect warmth

...

Your feathers ruffled

Your song clear

You sing slowly in my ear

...

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. Beautifully written.

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i love the last 2 verses-
but this last verse has very romantic/sweet emotion...

""Your feathers ruffled
Your song clear
You sing slowly in my ear""

Just Beautifully insinuatingly creative (:

[Arthur Henn]

Nothing better than the warm melody of a birds song in the morning!

This was nice! Thank you for sharing.

Art

[alan peter kelly]

this is a beautiful song for my mind...the repetition is perfectly sublime...the entire write made sensual by delicate imagery...elegant and totally endearing...strong...yet subtle as the change in the texture of air from night to morning...