Something like love

Something like love

A Poem by Hviske

Something like love

love, a love so deep

deeper then the sea

it bindes me makes me desperate

when I think about him

my soul escapes me

his eye penetrate deep inside of me

reading me

discovering me

he's my keeper

im no longer the owner of my own body

my lips are his

my hands are no longer mine

my skin is now his to claim

I would give my life just to hear his voice

In the silent darkness of the night

My love for him is like a flame that grows

with every passing day

with every tender kiss

with every arousing touch

::sigh::

like fire

life as it used to be is just a hazy after thought

after meeting him

Love a mere myth until i set eyes on him

Its hard to breath around him

yet i need him

because he's part of me now

because we belong

 

© 2008 Hviske


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These wonderful words and phrases epitomise love... if only more people would and could understand what it really is, the world would be perfect. Tragically, that's an impossibility because doubters fight emotions and kill them stone dead.

'Its hard to breath around him ... yet i need him ... because he's part of me now ... because we belong' - how true - as long as the same beautiful and deep feeling is reciprocated.

Thank you for sharing a superbly written poem.





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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These wonderful words and phrases epitomise love... if only more people would and could understand what it really is, the world would be perfect. Tragically, that's an impossibility because doubters fight emotions and kill them stone dead.

'Its hard to breath around him ... yet i need him ... because he's part of me now ... because we belong' - how true - as long as the same beautiful and deep feeling is reciprocated.

Thank you for sharing a superbly written poem.





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There;s nothing like love, and you've expressed this wonderfully. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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