Asylum

Asylum

A Poem by Hviske

Im not supoused to be here

nope, no sir

im ok

im fine

i sit here in this cold room

on my bed

everyday i think about him

it makes me smile

he was always so very happy

why wouldnt he be he had everything

i breathe

i dream

im fine

i was just a little mad

ok so i stabbed him a little

there was so much blood

it was funny

i couldnt help but laugh

hahahaha

 i remember how he would scream in pain

he couldnt walk from the pain

his last words where that he loved me

im fine

im fine

::sigh::

i dont belong here

im fine

your just as crazy as me

 

© 2008 Hviske


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sometimes when im tired i start thinking like this.
good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i think this is very good. its almost like i can see myself sat in the room. scribbling into a note pad, rocking, im saying 'im not crazy you are' but im writing, 'your just as crazy as me'
this is like, the remorse of a child with no guilt.. strange my views i know.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow!
very nice!
didn't kno wut u were talking about till the very end!
kinda emo and phyco but nice! :)



Posted 16 Years Ago


Crazy good =]

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this one a lot.
morbid, but good! lol

Posted 16 Years Ago



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