The Sun's Veil

Deep Within The Unending Sea, Massive Waves

Crest and Pierce Through The Dimly-Lit Sky.

The Sun's Lighting is Unusually Dim due to

The Haze Surrounding It.

In this Tumultuous Sea an Abundant

amount of Waves Diligently Attempt

to Pierce The Opaque Haze Shielding

The Sun.

In an Unfolding Instant, The Highest

Sea-Crested Wave Pierces Through

The Veiling Haze Of The sun.

An Immediate Merging Takes Place.

Ths is a Truly  Unique Occurrence.

An abundant amount of Crested Waves

Feverishly Attempted to Pierce This

Dense Coated Haze Around The Sun,

But None Were Able To Achieve this,

Except For One.

This Particular Wave had Impeccable

Aim, and True Valor in

Comparison to the Others.

Its' Stamina Surpassed all The

Other Waves, By Far.

At its' Very First Attempt, Its'

Aim was Successful.

Once This Merging Occurred The

Sea and Sun Become One.

Such Surmounting Beauty Exists

Between This Intricate Union.

Its' Horizons are Now Unending.

No Barriers Exist Between the Two.

During Their Merging, The Sun's

Haze Begins To Gradually Fade Away

Into The Unabiding Sea.

The Haze Of The Sun Served As

A Visible Veil Shielding It From

Imperfected Mergings.

The Wave That Was Victorious

Was Able to Truly Find Its'

Way To The Sun Directly.

Its' Aim was Direct and Infallible.

All The Other Waves Got Lost

In The Haze and Got Tossed

Back Into The Ravenous Sea.

However This wave succeeded

at its' very First Attempt.

Once this Triumph Occurrred

The Sun's Veil Dissipated Altogether.

Now It Shines to Its' Fullest

Potential.

Its' Lighting Upon The Sea and

Sky is Transparently Lucid.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This is exquisitely poignant. You have a unique flavor & style to your poetry, love the message here.

[A. Amos]

This is one of my favorite piece I have read in writer's cafe, you took your readers to a journey and in between so many messages you shared. This poem defines your brilliance and I truly enjoyed. Respect

[michele vera]

That is Honestly One of The Biggest Compliments I ever received. You are so Kind.Thank You Very Much. Your writing is Absolutely Beautiful! It covers Truly significant Themes that are very intertwined with my own Life. I Love Your work! Thanks again.

[A. Amos]

You my friend truly are a God gifted writer and it's an honor to meet you and be your friend, as one day the whole world will be following you as a true star, because that is what you truly are...you're most welcome

[michele vera]

Awe That Was Tremendously Beyond Touching To Me! I am Truly Honored and Humbled By Your Graciousness! You Truly Made My Night! I Honestly Can't thank You Enough! I'm So Happy We Came Across Each Other! Thank You so Much! You Are So Very Kind!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend and again honor is all mine..

[michele vera]

The Honor is Mine, As Well!

[Kopa...]

This is a phenomenom I would want to have a birds eyes view if for ever it adones this, great use of the abstract mind, lovely piece Michele.

[michele vera]

Thank You so Much, it means a lot to Me. Im so Happy You Enjoyed it! You are so right with making reference to abstract. I tend to Express myself in a more or less abstract Form. Thanks for taking the time to Read it.You are a Phenomenal writer! I truly loved your Poetry that I read today!