Surfacing Currents

The Wholeness Of Times' Compaction

Steadily Starts To Unravel Slowly.

Lapping Fragmented Currents start

to Wash Ashore.

As These Under-Currens Wash

Ashore, they have a limited Time

to be Analyzed.

For In a short time the Sea Sucks it Right

Back in  into its' Entirety.

A Small Time-Frame is granted

for these surfacing currents to

be Explored.

The Sea's Insatiable Hunger

Symbolizes The Hour=Glass.

Once its' Rushing Waters Engulf

the surfacing currents, time has

disaappeared.

Then it all starts once again.

its' a Constant Process.

 

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very beautiful and gentle soft peace.


I do love the Ocean and water.
And the currents are beautiful as
they Roar upon the shores.


Thank you for sharing this Soft Elegant piece.

blessings. kindred poet

[michele vera]

Thank You so Much, it truly means a lot!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet

[michele vera]

Thank You So Much. I Love Your Screen Name,it's Very Special...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you I have had this a long time I have the same one on deviant art :) you heard of that before haven't you

[michele vera]

No I'm Going To Check it Out Thouh-Thanks for Telling Me...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I do Believe Kindred It is family Kin is what it means :) but have always loved it I am a family person and always try to make my writings that way no cussing and about real love if it is not lust and not Erotic and not Erotica as I am a hopeless romantic and a book worm so love reading.

[michele vera]

Yes that's right, I didn't think of Kin at first. I thought of Kindred, for Kindred Spirits. I Loved The Name Right Away... I Too am A True Romantic...It's Pretty Much what I'm all about. I'm going to Read some of your Poetry Later On... I'm Looking forward to It...I'll Send You some Reviews after I read Them..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

yes you can message them to me I don't have my review sent on I will get them if you paste the URL of the poem in email on here :) yes sometimes ones call me kindred spirit it was from that but I did poet since I do poetry so it is that Kindred and KP. sure you have a blessed evening :)

[michele vera]

You as Well...

[A. Amos]

Love your style of writing brilliant and elegant. Thanks for sharing

[michele vera]

Thank You So Much, I Feel Your Writing Displays Brilliance and Eloquence, and True Deep-Seeded Emotional Love, that's just some of its' Beauty that your writing Displays.

[A. Amos]

Its an honor you like my work, I truly am amazed with your talent. You're most welcome my dear

[michele vera]

I Feel The Same! Thank You So Much!

[Kopa...]

This could pass for a master_class art work, the simple events of the beach explained in a true writers form, I loved the words of choice, splendid work.

[michele vera]

Thank You so Much! Im Tremendously Flattered.You are Truly Encouraging, and I Value That so Much! I have such a strong Love For The Beach. I tend to Write about it quite often. Your reviews mean alot! Thanks so much!