no love

this is about loving someone who doesnt love you back, and how it can take control of your life.

No love

 

Have you ever loved somebody, who doesnt love you back.

It is awful, its like a disease. It takes over you, it controls you.

it is like, you want to spend every dying second of the day with them but they only see you because they pity you. They see you every once in a while but they really dont want to know.

 

Do you know how much it hurts? Every day without them is like another knife to the heart. With every single excuse, With every single rejection. Your heart just bleeds more and more. Every day and every night, you just sit there crying your heart out because it hurts.

 

Well thats me, my heart bleeds for you and you are just blind to see,

that i love and all you seem to do is just hurt me. Then you just leave?

Why have you got to do this to me? Why are you making my heart bleed?

Why are you showing no love to me? Are you really that cold hearted? You said that you love, then why have we parted? Why have you left me broken hearted?

You just cant see it, can you? you just cant see what you are doing to me.

 

Some times i hate you, Sometimes i want your heart to bleed.

Sometimes i want you to feel the pain that you have caused me,

but no, im stronger then that, its about time for me to see.

Its time to face the facts, to open my eyes and see that you never have, and never will have no love for me

Author's Note

it is my first one on this website. dont be afraid to tell the truth as i shall take all criticsm in my stride and learn from my mistakes. so tell me what do you think about it?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

it is almost like a confessional to self~ a self therapuetic poem drawing light and clarity along each line until the reaility hits home as painful as it may be~ a poem as a step to healing~ honest and open~ a poignant write~

it is unfortunate that in life our love is sometimes disregarded and cast aside with such little thought~

[Hellslastwarrior]

I liked the very first verse alot dude nice flow of words keep it smooth nice job keep writing.
Ted