A Lonely Place

A Lonely Place

A Poem by Michael Gill
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A poem that speaks upon the unbridled reality of when ones depressed state of being surfaces

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I've spent the last few years clearly seeing 
The faults that have corrupted my every being 
And even though I've tried to hide 
My sadness still lingers deep inside
I've tried to convince myself that loneliness was simply a phase
That would be replaced with happiness for the rest of my days 
But It's clear to me now that I'm a mistake
And It shatters my soul every time that I wake
I'm finally starting to admit that I have been defeated 
From all of this worlds unfortunate mistreatment 
And even though a heaven may await
I'd rather fall now and leave the rest to fate
So I will sit here one last time in a lonely place 
Angry at the smiles that I've tried to chase
Confined to a world no longer that I've laid to cry
Where I'm more afraid to live than I am to die

© 2014 Michael Gill


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Loneliness and depression are are confined to the world of shattered souls. You have penned a great one...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael Gill

10 Years Ago

Thanks as always for your review! I hoped you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................

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Michael Gill
Michael Gill

Philadelphia , PA



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