To find Beauty in a Negative Space

To find Beauty in a Negative Space

A Poem by Michael Gill
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Without the sensation of hate, we would never know how to love

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Below the stars showered by night
and through every beat of a broken heart
A vagrant light begins to fade
And so does every love we've ever shared
Passion, spirit and soul that once was a Spring blossom
Has left nothing for us but the sharp sting of a dead vine
The cold bite of an empty heart
Burns longer than the scream of a volcano
And the ash captures us 
Blinding every memory that brought us together
I look at you through a sharp shard of shattered glass 
Seeing nothing but a broken man
And I realize only now that love should not be sought after
Just the same as hate should not be avoided
Because without both, one would never know the other
Taking from me the chance to have ever loved you at all

© 2014 Michael Gill


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Michael Gill
My first post on this site. Please let me know what you think. Thanks :)

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This was beautiful and heart wrenching. I love it, thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael Gill

11 Years Ago

And thank you for reading! :)
A splendid read and write for a first post. You have done a wonderful job,...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wow. That is an honor ...My pleasure . Any time...Please send some read requests when you post...:)
Michael Gill

11 Years Ago

Definitely!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)....

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Michael Gill
Michael Gill

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