Observation 2

one if a series of exercises about looking and clarity

                                 Rain hitting the window

                                 Droplets begin it again

                                 The return to vapour

                                 In one splendored splash

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Its all to quick the clarity of thoughts that come to mind and there's so many layers! Nice brevity and its like being there at the window!.

[Michael Oliver]

Thankyou Andrew - yep its November its grey its wet and yuk

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just when clarity of a thought comes, it disappears in the same instant...and we are just as lost as we were.
j.

[Michael Oliver]

Yes we live the life Metaphor as poets I agree Jacob