Observation

something I just swa

                                Watch - a leaf falls

                                 So the wind plays

                                 On a garden chair

                                 It takes a rest

Author's Note

Wanted to write something very clear almost precise

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Yes! and some of the best moments are those that are free. Nice brevity Michael capturing the feeling and the imagery.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we fall...and lie down for the last time...it is eternal rest...
parallels here...
beauty in a few words...
j.

[Michael Oliver]

trouble is Jacob we can hear the swish of the reapers scythe approaching with each loss that happens around us -