The falling leaf

No points of erudition this smooth falling

No point of the progress to articulate

Even a green spiral of given thought

Belies the time the space and speculation

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a smooth falling it is...the pendulum sway of the leaf as it descends to the ground...the poetic hand you enlightened us with here is most brilliant!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the falling leaf, falls to its death...too much time to think, as the wind causes it to sway back and forth...

yet the falling leaf of memory or of articulation...seems to find no breeze to hold it up.

[Michael Oliver]

Thank you Jacob - so you go tit Zen