The way the french pronounce 'image'

reslly concentrated pieces

Pathway - mute gleam 

Into winter

Day's slumbering 

Present - passes 

Punctuation 

Mistletoe dots

Sky - correction 

Drawn pencil soft 

A splatter -leaves

Twig suspended 

Spotted with age 

Yellow - alone 

Idle summer

Beyond bleakness  

And stream ignored 

Narrow doorways

Reviews

[writing mojo]

this word portrait is earned though reflection, ponder
the purpose one has solitude interlinking, interlocking roads of blue
existence hued until the light shows through arks
breath taking the dawn
surfacing into the color of life
and love..excellent piece

[Marie]

This shows that you are a painter; I can see you putting it on canvas.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"correction drawn pencil soft" wow, love that...all of these, seasons, life, shortness of breath, enjoy each one, they are fast and gone.
much sleep, not enough awake time...then death.

these all work so well together...and separately....less is more.

[Michael Oliver]

Thanks Jacob less might seem less but to be so takes longer so is ore in one respect