Notices 8 Rewritten

There is a shrine in the Ashmoleum - Egyptian that makes me confront those areas in myself which are often unspoken

Gods become -etched from the pale sandstone 

A formal walk of deities in procession

A wheaten cone - a supplication - is considered 

Accepted - the offered bread - confirms a  presence

See my bestowed silence in this timely cloak

See me revealed as your beliefs revelation

Questioned - understood -the inarticulate - 'I was' 

My unfathomed -'Am' - in this perpetual frame

Reviews

[writing mojo]

the way you describe an Am- is intriguing and blending of philosophical from hues,
many archetype faces to place one brush stroke on/
but the way you take to your vow of the unknown makes the silent man understood..great piece

[Michael Oliver]

Many thank for your comments - feel honoured that you go something out of this piece

[Sami Khalil]

You frame perpetual-ism in the silence of timely cloaks and offer deities supplication in the procession of acceptance. A wonderful write...:)......................

[A. Amos]

I like your work deep and profound, your poetic talent shines in every verse my friend. Look forward to read more of your work...

[Michael Oliver]

That is very kind of you to think so. My work is not easy I admit but I am still looking to find the structures and words to map this inner space of experience

[A. Amos]

I truly enjoyed and you're most welcome my friend