More street life

one of those observations worked up from notes while drinking coffee in my usual drinking place.

Above the roofs - the dormers - bright - white

clouds then walls and now red bricks

In shadow - a man - blue - stands - smokes

Salutes his mouth with quick quick precision

So into the barbers - another soon follows

Sunlight - empty -white - the shop window bars

The street frames 

- everyday -

figures occupied 

-under - 

Recognition of a red white spiral

Reviews

[Stephen]

I conceptualized some pics. on my mind reading this short write that there`s a rainy season ~~ a man standing nearby the window ~~ looking out the room ~~ feeling the coldness of rain with an every sip of a coffee .. this poem`s very good to read. It refreshes my mind. Well written!

[Michael Oliver]

Interesting it was a fresh spring morning , I was in my usual cafe drinking capuccinos with y friend note book on the table looikng don Sun Street in the Market Town of Hitchin. The street is very old , the site of the cafe is where an old inn used to stand called the Angel which in the late 15th century Henry the Seventh stayed in . And yet you got to the heart of the imagery time and place are incidental to the deeper truth - thanks for reading M